Saturday, August 25, 2007

ARE YOU GONE

(These lines show the feelings of a person who does not know whether his beloved has left or is around as he knew her......he misses her)


The flow rushes through my veins

Talking to nothing but clouds above

The voices in the head

Turn to mute

All seems to rise inside

The silence is HUSHED


[Chorus]

I never thought that I would cry

When I don’t have you by my side

Now I just don’t live any day

When my heart is so far away

Every thing reminds me of who I was with you

Baby - I MISS YOU


The space in my heart

Speaks but your name

Thoughts crash in my head and go insane

Do you ever feel the same

I never felt this way before

My life does not seem mine anymore


The sun moon & stars are not the same

ARE YOU GONE?


[Chorus]


The time does not flow

It just passes by

I feel you here with me

I still see your arms around me- I want to fly

Is it just a game

Or you really felt the same


We had loved each other

Thought it was true

The smiles the tears the blush & sneers

Felt all so new

The eyes are now dry I just feel no sigh

I can still feel the dew

I MISS YOU.


(Lucky Sharma)

2 comments:

GEM said...

Its my first song ever I guess...wher I have used the simplest of words & tried to keep them rhyming so that music can be added to it. Dolet me knwo what all should be changed about it to be more apt to convert to a song.

Anonymous said...

"The flow rushes through my veins

Talking to nothing but clouds above

The voices in the head

Turn to mute

All seems to rise inside

The silence is HUSHED"


Simply Superb... truly reflecting the reality.
IP