Raindrops on the dry sand
Clouds raining to fill this land
Dark and shinning on the desert sky
Gushing winds bring in your smell
It makes my heart swell.
Breathing this cold
Something freezes inside
Am I still alive
I hear my heart beats go insane
Do u hear me?
Looking around
I see the same sky
Everything seems new
But all pictures include you
Oh! I know its not true.
Rolling, Misleading
The winds hurt my head
I am not going close
Not close to the wind
Not close to myself
Can't hear myself.
No sleep in my eyes
I am asleep
Frozen, forgotten- can't hold on
How can I let it go
Feels HOLLOW.
Do me right
Don't want to fight
No one but me
Got to set me freE
Hear me!!
Do you see me?
The cold in the winter is me
Falling down forever
The rain in the picture is me
Faling down forever
The rain on your face is me
Do you hear me?
Undo the distance
I AM WAITING
Placid and cold
As stoned in Gold
Shatter the pain
Which does feel sane
HEAR ME.
6 comments:
heard you !!
Good One.
I was a bit confused after reading will definitely read word by word some time and give you detailed feedback.
Cheers!
anuj.
Very nice, is it for someone in particular or just like that?
Lucky ji, Very nice poem. For one moment I felt I recahed in some distant land. Keep writing.
Lalit
Very nice.... Your poetry has got very nice consistency. "Breathing this cold" & "Do you see me?" paragraphs are jus superb. Keep up the good work!
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Hey Lucky
Never thought ur thoughts are so deep....hats off...its tough to express ur heart....but to pen it....it takes class
I dont have words...
but for the depth of poem.....in the words of Tennyson I can but say
"Behold, we know not anything,
I can but trust, that good shall fall,
At last far off, at last to all,
Every winter change to spring"
15 January, 2008 16:33
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