Being phlegmatic seems an illusion
Piqued by the storm
Seems PIED
Is But called CRASS
Talking about the enemy within
Canckering the soul
Venerating the whole
Being perpicuous does not makes
A PLACEBO
Living piecemeal everyday
Pining for the forgotten me
Plaintive of the sustenance
Digressed over mere existence
Mendacious is what becomes
Of the with desultory lies
Plagiarising is but an analogy
When you copy the one at apogee
Reaching the nadir of detractio
Hurts little as an infraction
Discerned by peruse
Found by an obsequious pertinent
Is but said for what
IS LOST
Abjected abdicated HURT
Wrenched -is who I am
I am living for who
I AM
No Pylon
No guide
All Quandry-Just PETRIFIED
More deeper than my skin.
Prying down inside
Ferreting-DEEP
Queasy by search
Fading away in evanescence
Now Quietude settles in
Quips just FREEZE
Am no TRAITOR TO DEMISE
True are the lies
Exhumed from deep inside
QUIVERING under duress
Rallying against time
I am LOST!!!
2 comments:
Are you just trying to use the fanciest words possible?
Discerned by peruse? That doesnt even make sense!:P
Wouldnt it be discerned by perusal?
And more deeper? The "more" seems redundant.
I could go on...
I gues my question is... what is this?
Youre right ash.
I think I just hate poetry. All those years of high school english have scarred me...
So i apologise GEM, i let my distaste for poetry get the better of me.
That said, i still think youre trying to use too many fancy words:P
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